E n g l i s h 9 W r i t i n g s
10/10/2017 3 Comments Rambling AutobiographyI was born in the middle of a snow storm. My first home had fuzzy green front steps. I have a scar on my eyebrow that tells a story of my strength. I absolutely adore baked mac and cheese from Coffee Please in Madeira. There is a sparkly pickle ornament on my Christmas tree every year that holds a precious tradition. Whenever I travel somewhere new, I get a bracelet to remember that place. I have to draw flowers on any paper I get to stay focused in class and sometimes I resort to my body. I'm scared of making decisions because I always make the wrong ones. I hate bell peppers with a burning passion because they are horrendously selfish. I once lost a magenta Croc to the bellowing Miami River. I have only left the county once and it was the most intoxicating feeling I've ever felt. I have a weakness for socks and have a pair for each holiday and more. My mother used to tell me, "I love you more today than yesterday" and I thought she was saying she didn't love me yesterday. I cannot sleep without the constant swish of a fan. I hate the feeling of inevitable salty tears from traveling down my cheeks. I never said goodbye to my last dog when she died and that regret always lingers in my mind. I am an expert in procrastination yet somehow I always get things done. I want to live life to the fullest and accept happiness in all forms...
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Carly Richardson
5/22/2018 10:10:38 am
Great commentary and making your stories visual. Even though each story last only one sentence, I still understood what was going on and could imagine what was going on.
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Gavin Arrowood
5/25/2018 07:28:06 am
The beginning sentence is really good, I don't know what is so good about it, but I for some reason really enjoy it. I like the flow of it and enjoy the word choice that was in the rambling autobiography. I can tell that you worked really hard on it and took your time to make sure that it was a good one.
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Skylar Champion
5/25/2018 08:23:17 am
I loved how you had a good mix of humor and deeper content in this. Each story fit really well and I think that your word choice for some of this really adds a lot of depth.
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