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5/10/2018 4 Comments Two voices poemStay calm
You’re ignorant The beast isn’t real I am the beast Where are they? They don’t care They are ready to kill I have to tell them They think you’re batty The beast isn't real You are the beast They are attacking I have consumed you They killed me.
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Sarah Driscoll
5/22/2018 01:10:27 pm
This is really good! If I were you, I would add the names- I got simon, but I'm not sure of the other character. Also, the poem doesn't make sense if you only read one persons text, which I think it should? But, good job otherwise!
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Meghan
5/24/2018 06:12:58 pm
I also think it would be easier to understand if you added names, but the context was very good. I love how the only lines that they both said were talking about killing. I also liked how the characters were almost asking questions to themselves. Good job!
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Gavin Arrowood
5/25/2018 07:23:27 am
I really enjoyed how even if you read one voice, it still made since. The voice that you put into this poem made it seem as if I could hear them talking even though I am reading it in my head
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Skylar Champion
5/25/2018 08:18:51 am
It's a little hard to understand just from reading it once since you didn't use the names, but I feel like because of that, it could apply to more themes and characters than just two. For example, I feel like from reading this, the second voice could be fear or the concept of the beast just to name a couple.
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